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22 January 2013 @ 07:43 pm
His Irritating Nature.  
Title: His Irritating Nature.
Author: kissmegreen
Category:  Drabble
Pairing: Taguchi x Nakamaru (TaguMaru)
Rating: G
Genre: hmmm AU
Disclaimer: I only own the story...
Summary: Junno is quite the optimistic Narcissist... and like it or not, Nakamaru likes to admire.
Word Count: 416

note: written for itz_menos because I promised to love her more and also... I literally wrote this in 20mins but can't think of a title so please give me one Done! Thanks girl

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Nakamaru always believes that there’s something strangely exciting about Junno… this prevailing buoyancy that would almost make a very sad person feel guilty for his own misfortune. Perhaps it’s Junno’s very carefree nature, his ability to make simple everything the world may otherwise find complex, his playful and easygoing mannerism, his naïve but not completely innocent expressions, or maybe just how Nakamaru always finds himself complacent in the company of the man.

It’s a weekday and they are standing in the lobby of the jimusho waiting on the shuttle that would take them both to the studio for the day’s recording of KAT-TUN Gatsun. However, with 5 minutes to spare until their driver gets them, Nakamaru finds himself absentmindedly preoccupied with unwinding thoughts of the tall nonchalant figure before him, when with a start, he’s directed towards the low beeping of his phone.

In a confused gesture, he flips it open to read:

‘If I didn’t know better, I would think you are smitten by me, Nakamaru-kun’.

Nakamaru’s eyelids twitch and he frowns in annoyance at being caught off guard staring, but he remains seemingly unnerved, giving Junno a wary look, but then flinching almost noticeably when greeted with Junno’s knowing smile, his eyes teasing with accusation.

Nakamaru feels his stomach lurch a bit in a sort of fancy, anxiety working his nerves as he flips the phone closed without responding, deciding it best not to give Junno the satisfaction of his distracting him.

‘Is it my new hair? or is it the colour or the fit of the jeans I’m wearing today?’

Nakamaru clicks his teeth reading, mildly irritated not so much at Junno’s insinuation but at the bare truth behind his own feelings, because not only is Junno strangely exciting to him, but Nakamaru also finds him…

‘I changed my cologne too… a scent to your liking maybe?’.

Nakamaru is now beyond agitation, cursing himself the most for finally mentally admitting that he’s annoyingly attracted to Junno. So he swiftly turns around with resolved intention of snapping at the jeering and narcissistic Junno, but then he pauses in his action when another incoming text alarms his phone:

Nakamaru, very suddenly flits Junno a glance, eyes wide and heart beating rhythmlessly before turning away with his back facing Junno fully, shoulders tensing and his cell phone he still fiddles in his hand, reading over every word like it’s a very important prose of instructions.

‘Want to give it a try?’

Without looking back, Nakamaru finds himself nodding.

....

end.


notes: soooo? I know it's short, but I promise to write you a longer one someday soon >.<

 
 
Current Mood: chipperchipper
Current Music: one day by kat-tun
 
 
 
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 22nd, 2013 11:58 pm (UTC)
for you my love :-)
Surprise Surprise, Aimee, my dear and Happy Wednesday :-)

Edited at 2013-01-23 12:04 am (UTC)
itz_menos: junru-smileitz_menos on January 23rd, 2013 02:39 am (UTC)
Re: for you my love :-)
"..because I promised to love her more " -- Aww. ♥

:D You don't know how happily giddy I'm feeling right now the moment I saw this on my Friends Page *__* I'm actually a little down this morning because of this job thing that I told you but you made me happy. You did this in a very timely manner. Lol.

I still haven't read it but I just thought I should comment immediately before reading it thoroughly so expect a comment again after :)

Thank you for this!
itz_menos: junru-glancesitz_menos on January 23rd, 2013 03:13 am (UTC)
Re: for you my love :-)
"Nakamaru always believes that there’s something strangely exciting about Junno… this prevailing buoyancy that would almost make a very sad person feel guilty for his own misfortune. Perhaps it’s Junno’s very carefree nature, his ability to make simple everything the world may otherwise find complex, his playful and easygoing mannerism, his naïve but completely innocent expressions, or maybe just how Nakamaru always finds himself complacent in the company of the man."

I instantly fell inlove with your introduction that as if it's already one fiction that can still be too short for a drabble but everything is essential, that one Taguchi x Nakamaru fan would really be in all smile while reading word after another of this :)

And the teasing of Junno is cute that I could almost literally see the exact reactions of Nakamaru. It's the fact that he wanted to be irritated but then again, Taguchi's charming strength that pulls Nakamaru more into him is something that seriously he can't really let go of *_* so this statement is just epic: "Nakamaru is now beyond agitation, cursing himself the most for finally mentally admitting that he’s annoyingly attracted to Junno" :D

You do know that I'm more into just a subtle, cute and sweet fanfiction especially with these two so I really like this one besides since these guys aren't that two lovey-dovey/fluffy way to each other in an obvious manner for real, this story makes it way adorable in some way. They tend to pull each other's charm in a way that both of them can be just natural as it is :)

Also, how you end this is just nice and lovely. I don't think it would bring the most feeling that I have right now if it got longer than this. I really can't explain it but for me, sometimes, when it becomes way longer that I think it has to be, it makes the certain feeling that fanfiction brings, goes away.

Btw, about the title.. you are aware that I'm bad with titles let alone I struggle to think of one in my own lj posts >.< Lol. But, will "His Irritating Nature" be good enough? Idk, I can't think better xD

Now, I have to go back to work cause I almost forgot I have one..

Thank you so much for this, Lyan and here's a clap for you,my dear ♥ ♥ ♥!!
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Edited at 2013-01-23 03:13 am (UTC)
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 23rd, 2013 03:58 am (UTC)
Re: for you my love :-)
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That's right, you're not a lover of long fics so thank goodness it's just a drabble XD and I can completely understand your love for shorter fics... I love drabbles and ficlets because they are short and straight to the point XD

I'm really glad you liked this one XD I was really debating the rating for this... as in if I should go fluff or AU so I'm happy I went the AU way :-)

and as for the title... I'll use it XD

I hope your day and the planning for the rest of the month goes well XD

*hugs tight*
sugiexsugiex on January 24th, 2013 07:54 am (UTC)
I liked it ! ♥ You're making me ship random pairings I don't even consider in the past

Thank you for sharing ~
itz_menos: junru-dorkitz_menos on January 24th, 2013 08:41 am (UTC)
Sorry for butting in but I like that last statement that you said xD ~

TaguxMaru is a rare pair to ship but they have this adorable points so I'd be glad having another fan of them? Lol. *__*

Edited at 2013-01-24 01:04 pm (UTC)
sugiex: Marusugiex on January 24th, 2013 02:46 pm (UTC)
They looked so cute together in an episode of DameYoru when they were both reporters for Ueda's faux boxing match but I just don't see how I can ship them.

Now it's a whole new perspective 8'D
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 24th, 2013 11:45 pm (UTC)
You're making me ship random pairings I don't even consider in the past

haha that's good news :-)

as long as JunDa still remains your favourite :)

Thanks for reading~
effi_g: Nakamarueffi_g on January 24th, 2013 11:53 am (UTC)
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeee!!!!
If I wasn't incredibly ridiculously in love with your JunDa magic... I'd say that you should write Nakamaru more often XD
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 24th, 2013 11:47 pm (UTC)
*_____________*
Thank you! XD

and great to know that JunDa owns your heart lol

Thanks for reading dear :-)
fierysunrisefierysunrise on January 24th, 2013 03:14 pm (UTC)
Awww! This was just so cute, I love it!<3 I can just picture everything as it happens in my mind, Nakamaru's reactions, Junno's 'knowing smile'. it's just so perf ajkdghihegrgdgnkgjr <3

kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 24th, 2013 11:48 pm (UTC)
*___________*
for my second attempt at this pairing, I'm very happy that you liked it. ;-)
and I love Junno's teasing games ~ XD
ayameayame_hadouken on January 25th, 2013 12:28 am (UTC)
hahaa, junno's smarm is the best; also good to know that i'm not the only person who gets that worked nerves feeling.

i enjoyed this :D <3<3
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 25th, 2013 10:29 am (UTC)
i enjoyed this :D <3<3

I'm glad it did :-)
Thanks for reading XD
courtney_bubblecourtney_bubble on January 25th, 2013 04:03 am (UTC)
Wahh this is so amazingly perf<3<3 I love this story, and I am so glad you write for this pairing ahh hardly anybody does :') this was awesome, thanks so much for writing omg it's just perfect <33
kissmegreen (Lyan)kissmegreen on January 25th, 2013 10:31 am (UTC)
Oh Thank you for such a lovey feedback XD
happy I could help out a TaguMaru-starved fan ^^